Same As It Ever Was
I can imagine my father and mother
lounging together on the family room sofa,
her head on his lap, his fingertips
making whorls in the sea of her hair,
contentedly watching some oater,
the raucous sounds of home,
the family they’d constructed
rough-housing in the unfinished basement,
the inevitable crying from the youngest brother
when he’s hit too hard by the middle one,
mom rising with a sigh to go comfort, her job,
while he, rifle-cracking cocktail ice
between back molars,
considers his role in all this —
pillar, provider, protector, punisher —
and basks in the satisfaction of doing everything right,
how that drive had come from his father,
how he’s handcuffed it to his sons.
Meanwhile, the evening news, Cronkite speaks of change:
Twin Towers going up in Manhattan,
the Earth beginning to burn.
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There so much I love in this poem, straying with :
“the family they’d constructed
rough-housing in the unfinished basement,”,
how “he parents roles are defined,
“rifle-cracking cocktail ice
between back molars,” is poignant so are the 4 Ps.
And the last stanza, bringing in Walter Cronkite to deliver change, with a mix nostalgia and doom.
This is wonderful!
This feels like it could be a Talking Heads song! The ending is the fortelling.
This is a great poem, Bill. I love how you weave the domestic setting with the larger constructs (literally and figurative) of the nightly newscast.
Wow! That portrait of your family is a classic, setting up the amazing turn at the end. The final stanza is chilling.
Yikes, you draw a sharp family portrait!
Dang, Bill! I especially love “rifle-cracking cocktail ice/ between back molars,” but this whole poem is extremely vivid. All of it feels just right!
So real “the inevitable crying from the youngest brother/when he’s hit too hard by the middle one,”
Man! “rifle-cracking cocktail ice/between back molars”
Shew, Bill. So many good lines here but the perspective and wit creating indelible scene is spot on and specific. Love “making whorls in the sea of her hair,/contentedly watching some oater,” leading us to the end
You paint with words a lovely family portrait with hints of culture- the Norman Rockwell for poetry!
Flavor of the times captured successfully! You keep outdoing yourself. “how he’s handcuffed it to his sons.” wow!