Spring on Big Mountain
Spring on Big Mountain
Dusk arrives as I gaze through my dusty
back window to the crown of the greening
mountain. Yesterday I heard the first cry
of the whippoorwill. The warbling
caw vibrated up and down
my spine like a tiny lighting bolt. I have heard
dark stories about this mountain. Neighbors
say at the turn of the century
a moonshiner was shot dead by Cates
Creek. But there are little jolts
of light everywhere: goldenrod,
wild petunias & pale minature
orchids, thousands
of white trillium jutting up.
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Really like the juxtaposition of serene mountain flowers and the “moonshiner shot dead by Cates Creek” and
a nugget of morbidity, love it, hidden in a cornucopia of beauty….. love this.
Beauty and danger, well crafted.
How evocative, Linda, especially the surprising image of “little jolts of light” that ties the gunshots to the flowers.
Delightful. We have to record you reading this and add it to the video.
love little jolts of light
they energize us
your poems have them: little jolts of light everywhere
That ending is gorgeous and surprising!
Beautiful mountain flowers of light, interspersed with tragedy. A little slice of life!
Gorgeous.