summer day
wasps in bushes
dogs in cars
skeletons in closets
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wasps in bushes
dogs in cars
skeletons in closets
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I love the simplicity and the harsh parallel to reality. Its a true art to communicate ideas with few words and Summer Day does just that.
Thank you, Phillip……. I used to be chock full o words…. but I’ve whittled them down …..
I love the turn at the end. It was certainly unexpected. Good poem.
Thank you, Dennis…..I was actually surprised, too, when that line slipped out through some crack in the foundation….. had to write it down!
don’t we all have those skeletons, sigh… sometimes i wish life could be simpler…
Indeed, Michelle….. indeed…..
I keep turning this one over in my head. Great work.
?…. thanks, HB Elam!