The Release
I awake to sun w/a woman’s lips
& eyebrows, cheeks rouged by her
own heat, while I am now trunk
for torso, branches for legs, leaf
clusters for mammal hair.
There is a nest right by my ears
where nestlings whisper to me
as they sit on the blue shards
they’ve just made
by breaking free.
And I see over the hills where
rabbits gallop—each runs
in a cellophane spangle that
crinkles candy red or cornflower
or sweet violet.
I make the journey with them on
branch-legs, rustling w/an older green,
robins in my ears, having released
my various facades to the sun,
mayshesavorthemeveryone.
Now I rush w/rabbits, always
just behind them—I swear
they have wings that
outrun childhood.
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Beautiful, fresh descriptions. I love “…each runs/ in a cellophane spangle that/ crinkles candy red or cornflower/ or sweet violet.” Also love the first image of the sun with a woman’s lips.
Thank you!
I can see this clearly as a surrealist painting, Taunja. And I love the concept of outrunning childhood. What a vibrant poem!
Thank you, Nancy!
What an imaginative, lush poem, Taunja.
Thanks, Karen!
Incredible descriptions throughout this whole poem. I felt like I was running along with it.
Thank you so much!
visually stunnning…and the sounds…oh the sounds…especially “cellophane spangle that/crinkles candy red”
Thank you!