The Unclouded Day
With her bedrooms polished
and smelling of Pledge,
before another load of washing
must be gathered, my grandmother
lets breakfast dry on the dishes, drops
her stout body onto the piano stool
and plays the only hymn she knows by heart.
She could be chopping wood, the force
of her forearms and bosom ample
as her vision of a home beyond the skies.
She doesn’t embellish or let her fingers
fly above the melody like a ragtime beat
in a rowdy saloon. Her hymn is rich
like her pies, clean as her home,
solid as her steps marching
through a cloudless day.
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I love this snapshot of a poem. The details are a delight.
Beautiful clarity, as always. I feel right at home in your Grandma’s house. Love it!
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A grandmother’s strength and elegance so beautifully depicted in your poem.
Her hymn is rich
like her pies, clean as her home,
solid as her steps marching
through a cloudless day. – Really lovely!
“Oh they tell me of a home…” I can hear it now!
Good details, enjoyed this very much
Wonderful descriptions for all the senses from beginning to end!
the repetitive structure at the end is emphatic
This pulled a memory!: “smelling of Pledge”
Love: “Her hymn is rich/like her pies,/clean as her home,/solid as her steps marching/through a cloudless day.