Townshend Would Be So Disappointed Right Now
A wizard I am not
besot by steel balls
brain knotted mere flot-
sam in the drink
getting got by the machine
fraught
in slight delays of thought
another quarter in the slot
embarrassment was bought
I have multiball
on my third ball
tracking three balls
now I can’t fall
right?
bumpers buzzers
bells blares
bright lights and bold sounds
beautifully rhythmic
but only if there’s talent
the balls band together
in triangular formation
transporting me to Galaga
kamikaze aliens
this is a moment I cannot fail at
this is where I turn the whole game around
when it’s late
and it’s just you and me
way, way beyond the time
for me to speak my heart
my little ship
overwhelmed
freezes
fumbling fingers
fling frenetic
flippers fraction-
ally too early
and I watch
so much potential
slip
one
two
three
into oblivion
shoot again
is not highlighted
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Great one, Philip. So much fun to read aloud, some nice tenderness and yearning there, and the slipping into oblivion such a nice touch.
Love all the fricatives, and getting got by the machine. Nice poem.
You’ve captured this frustration beautifully. And what wonderful alliteration!
fumbling fingers
fling frenetic
flippers fraction-
all too early
Poetic gold.
Really nice sounds throughout! I also enjoy the “kamikaze aliens” and the “embarrassment [that] was bought” (an all-too-familiar experience, unfortunately)