warm/cold
You kissed my cheek this morning.
You are so soft really soft
You are so fucking soft.
I wrap my arms around your neck.
You are so warm.
I am so hard and cold so cold so cold.
Please, soften me like the rain does the earth
Please touch me kiss me kiss me
warm me.
You busted my lip this morning.
You are so rough really rough
You are so fucking rough.
I push hard against your chest.
You are so strong.
I am so willing and weak so weak so weak.
Please, strip me bare like the fall does the trees.
Please grab me hit me hit me
hurt me.
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Really like the repetition and use of antonyms in this. Made it feel dynamic to me, almost like I’m caught in a whirlwind.
Thank you so much. It felt like a whirlwind to me, too.
the pace of this piece is spot on.
Thanks so much for the compliment, and for taking the time to read.
I must say that I enjoyed reading your poem. I felt that you allowed me to enter your personal sanctuary. I will say that I like the line “Strip me bare like the Fall does the trees. I would have added “before Winter after.
Strip me bare like the Fall does the trees before Winter.
Overall, it’s rough, passionate, and mind blowing.
Thank you for taking the time to read and give feedback. I appreciate you.
The second stanza is so chilling.
Thank you, I think!! Haha.
I felt like I got to know you in this poem and I appreciate that
You cross the boundaries between two realities.