wet and obstinate
there’s a fog hugging onto the hills
that should’ve burned away
with the sunrise.
it should’ve disappeared.
dissipated into the country air
without leaving a mark.
but it’s stubborn, like me –
determined to stay in this holler,
to sink into the tender skin
of young leaves unprepared
for scorching summer.
i fill my lungs with the fog,
sure that it will travel through my body
and leave spring dampness in my blood.
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<3 "determined to stay" like the fog and "dampness in my blood"
…. ‘of young leaves unprepared’…. tender line, and my favorite in this lovely poem…
thanks so much, Amy! that means a lot ’cause i’m not always sure that I do tender well.
great imagery, the reader experiences what you describe
Dig this!
thanks so much, bub! <3 now we gotta' get me up your way to read some poetry and you down here! some sort of super rad poetic exchange program. I still use Break Every String as an example in a whole lot of my poetry writing workshops by the way…
“But it’s stubborn, like me”
I love this so much. Beautiful imagery!
“but it’s stubborn, like me –
determined to stay in this holler,”
Love this. Beautiful imagery!
I love the connection of earth and humanity
This is such an important, personal statement… I enjoy it…
Love the image of the “fog hugging onto the hills.” It makes me want to get into my car and drive all night to the mountains.
All I had to do was close my eyes and I was right back home in the mountains where I left a huge hunk of my heart. Lovely work, so glad you are back to share with us.
Yes. This is what I wanted to say <3
thanks so much for taking the time to read and comment here y’all. so sorry I’ve been a slacker about getting back to you! I appreciate each and every one of you and these comments make my day all month long.