When We Can’t Make Sense, We Stop Trying
They call her too close for comfort. It seems the lighting’s gotten
the best of her. It’s a matter of identity and it would seem she
doesn’t have one. Like a sparrow struggling with the weight of a
the best of her. It’s a matter of identity and it would seem she
doesn’t have one. Like a sparrow struggling with the weight of a
too-large breadcrumb, she can’t get off the ground. Someone
suggests water torture. Another, drowning. But she can hold her
breath for years – and has. She’s the last of her kind, all her kin
fed to a pack of female wolves in heat. It’s an unfair plight, as
plights are wont to be. But the town looks after her, although, of
course, from a distance. She has a chair. And the pottery.
Sunflowers bloom every July and it’s been said she knows Jesus.
She reminds them of outlying thread counts and last year’s
birthday parties. When it’s cold, she smells of praying. They’re
trying to erect a monument in town but the number of drive-bys
creates unintended chaos. A charity mentions this uphill battle
in the newspaper, and she reads about it 3 months later when
using the paper to pack her pottery. She eats the evidence. The
sunflowers sour. It starts to rain.
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In my mind, this poem’s layout is “justified” – meaning the left and right sides line up neatly at the edges to make a block of text. Unfortunately, I don’t think we can bring the margins in on this site – so I can’t justify the tighter block. You’ll have to just imagine this along with me. 🙂
The language and imagery here is so effective, so fascinating. The poem has a lot of moments. I love this — When it’s cold, she smells of praying. I really love the ending! Good stuff.
Ooh, so much to love in this, starting with the title!
The images are intoxicating. This poem made me drunk with what didn’t make sense, but did.
Love the complications and tensions in this poem. One to read again and again!
I also love the line “smells of praying.” Every bit of this poem is amazing! Your lines combine images that normally wouldn’t go together, but the way you crafted it flows so marvelously. So well done!
I hated how disoriented this poem made me feel! But this is really masterfully expressed, well done!