While You’re Away
Your cough,
too small for
a man your size
always annoyed me.
Because I know
that is bitchy
and irrational
I would just
clench my jaw
and sigh and
wait for you to do it
5 more times before
yelling at you
to take allergy medicine
or asking you
(accusingly)
if you were ok?
You’ve been away
for work for four days,
my first time in 8 years
being home this
long without you.
The house is quiet
without those coughs,
the yawns that drive
me crazy because
you Chewbacca-scream
throughout them
(like your Papaw
used to, you told me,
so I know that will
never change),
the clicks from
your video game
controller, loud
enough to hear
all the way
from the kitchen.
I adjust to the silence
as though it were
darkness;
I can make out
things I couldn’t
see before, a
little better all
the time.
For instance,
did you realize
how often
(how beautifully)
you sing?
How much
we laugh
together.
I never noticed
till now
how many
times a day
you call me
darlin’.
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The day to day…. put in a special way…. made this poem a favorite! My hubs works in NC every week….. what I wouldn’t give to hear that ‘gets on my EVERY nerve’ cough drop lip smack some days! I relate to this one?
I’m so glad to hear you relate! Thanks for the commiseration, Amy : )
Amazing!
Bianca – What a wonderful poem! Sometimes what bothers us is the first thing to be missed.
A cento using lines from your poem, http://lexpomo.com/poem/talking-with-the-dead-a-cento/