Wolf in Sheep’s Clothing: a sonnet
I wonder, if we pass in evening light,
you’ll sense I am an animal of night.
Or if your wary eyes are drawn to mine,
you’ll glimpse a normal girl: sheepish, benign?
Will your lips curve to form a new moon smile,
steps hesitate and pause, to talk awhile?
Or will you—heartbeat quickened—hurry by,
suspicious that the “normal” is a lie,
that underneath this wool a poet’s heart
hungers to savage words and name it art.
I crave to doff this coat, to stand exposed,
to howl each syllable, each verse composed.
I wonder, when you flee from me tonight,
if you’ll still strain to hear what I recite.
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Dang. I read this out loud to myself. So cool. Honest and revealing AND in form. “hungers to savage words and name it art” is fantastic. That’s basically what I feel like I’m doing. Yikes. And “to howl each syllable, each verse composed” works so well to get to your point but also the meter is perfect. And who gets the word doff in a poem?!
I thought I’d try something new. I’m still not sure how I feel about writing poetry with rules, the constraints feel unnatural. Funny that you pointed out “doff”, I was thinking as I wrote it that it’s such a dumpy word lol
Sidenote: I don’t know if it’s perfect sonnet meter. Don’t quote me there! It’s just perfect “in my head meter”. It’s so weird you wrote a sonnet because literally I’m working on a poem right now where I’m like wait am I writing a sonnet? So I started googling sonnets… and no, I am not. And so then I thought it might be fun to throw it through the sonnet filter. And no, it was not. So back to good ol’ Em form. Hee hee!
A clumsy first attempt and only loosely based on the form! I probably shouldn’t have specified. The rules were fourteen lines, ten syllables per line, each couplet rhyming, a reveal at the midpoint, and a transition in the last couplet. I’ll just claim poetic license here 😆