Years of Acreage
When cow pie cakes your boots,
and you stomp across our kitchen,
I am still here.
If the bottom riser on the back steps
comes loose again,
I am still here.
Though you put empty ice cube trays back in the freezer,
ignore uneven chair legs and again
forget to unclog the kitchen drain,
still I am here.
When mud puddles,
the baler breaks,
the John Deere stalls
and bottles of homebrew explode in the cellar,
indeed, I am still here.
I am here when Lafferty’s cows come through the fence again –
me, a white nightgown grabbing my ankles
as I chase them up the drive.
When Orion rises in the night sky,
and your furious voice rattles the teacups,
I will remain
as long as I can touch the scar on your chin,
the one I put there.
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Adore the intimate space you create.
Piece by piece.
Plus the turn of “I am still here”.
Those last two stanzas are like thunder, then lightning.
Wow.
Happy LexPoMo
Thank you so much, Tabitha!
Delicious! A wise and funny portrait of a marriage, warts and all. The last line made me smile.
Thanks, Kevin! (Great reading your work again this month.)
Tender images of a life together! Love this so much, and the title is yummy!
Thank you, Sylvia.
I cracked up at the last line!
I hope it is open to many imaginings. LoL Thank you!
especially love the exploding bottles in the cellar, the grabbing nightgown, and the scar
Thank you, River!
I adore this poem so much! You really know how to put the reader in your space. Though there’s intimacy in this piece the reader is never made to feel like we are invading. And the last line perfectly ties the whole poem up in a beautiful bow!
Oh, gosh! Thank you, Winter!
I was waiting for a volta or turn or twist, and that closing stanza did not disappoint. Masterfully dobe.
Thanks, Tom!
*done
Thank you, Tom!
From the title to the closing stanza, a perfect portrayal of marriage. So artfully done!
Thank you so much, Missy!
I especially like the detailed and condensed scene of:
I am here when Lafferty’s cows come through the fence again –
me, a white nightgown grabbing my ankles
as I chase them up the drive.
Shaun, I had FUN working on that strophe. LoL Thank you for the feedback.
i love the refrain and the disappearance of the refrain. the conclusion was stunning. fantastic poem
Thank you, Kris!
Love the repetition and ending
Thank you, Pat!
What an honest homage to partner!
Especially love:
as long as I can touch the scar on your chin,
the one I put there.
Thank you. When I was participating in (for lack of a better word) “hobby” writers’ groups — where I did learn a lot — repetition was tabu. Then when I took Eng. 207 at UKy, I learned about this device called “anaphora,” Working on this poem, I realized that was exactly what was required. But like magic, sometimes it works, and sometimes it doesn’t. LoL
Beautiful imagery!