Fever Dream
Honeybee wings and
honeysuckle vines and time
dripping with summer sap fat
as bears—grizzlies, polar—and sweat
stuck on the neck of July,
baptizing dancing feet of flies.
Swat the buzzing, the humming, the
unceasing sunset drowning
a cricket’s fiddle, a band of cicadas,
a woods so thick with haze it held
no edges, like a dream, a porch light
flickering a code every child knows,
without knowing why—come home.
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This is beautiful. I love your imagery and your line breaks. My favorite is ” dripping with summer sap fat as bears.”
I love everything you’re doing in this poem! It reads with such a nice rhythm.
I can feel the imagery. Great work!
That ending is a universal to many if not most readers here…
I felt completely immersed in this poem. ‘baptizing dancing feet of flies.’ was my favorite line. Really vivid and captivating work.
I hear the sounds in this noisy poem
Thank you, everyone, for your comments—for taking the time to read this piece. I appreciate you!