American Sentence CIII
Cowboy pencil-sketches on borrowed paper, rising red spruce forest.
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Cowboy pencil-sketches on borrowed paper, rising red spruce forest.
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Oh !!! Cowboy!
and
“pencil-sketches on borrowed paper,”
That’s stepping right.
Choo-choo
🚂 Thanks, Coleman!
Amazing how you capture so much in one sentence-tone, character and tension.
Thanks, Linda!
This one gives off a nice mental image! I can almost see the sketch forming, and the lines on the hand doing the sketching.
Glad to hear, L!
“Borrowed paper.” We own nothing in this world, except the love we choose to share. Good sentence.
Thanks!
And well said, Lee…”We own nothing in this world, except the love we choose to share.”
I love these sentences, Pam! Wondering how he’ll like the forest? Maybe another sentence for another day?
Thanks, H.A.
Love your questions…good fodder to ponder!
Cowboy sketches – borrowed paper. Great story told by these two items.
Thanks, Alissa!
Neat!
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Every word here is important – I got stuck wondering about the borrowed paper!
Yep, me, too 🙂
Borrowed paper, indeed! Is he sketching a forest–or is that where the train is heading?
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Love a cowboy who makes good use of his hands! The “rising” shows such movement.
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This sentence is so full yet leaves questions. I am happy that Cowboy sketches and wonder if it is the rising forest or something from his past.
Love your wonderings, Virginia!
Awesome! Great imagery.
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American Sentence . . . magnifique! Like any true learning experience, this piece raises new mysteries and uncertainties than answers. Always a master class when I study your work, Pam
Thank you! I am learning so much from everyone’s questions, wonderings, and comments on my work and reading the work of LexpoMo Gang of Poets. June is Master Class!
I agree with Michele, great imagery here!
Thanks, Eric!