Distinction
He quietly said into the dark room, into the straining night,
You’re a house, not a home.
The dying died a little more—
parched sunflower knocked sideways,
bent, hastening the water loss. Shortly,
his breath heavied and he twitched in some dream.
You’re a house, not a home
swallowed the positive space of atoms
until she shrank, flattened, and,
sucked inside out by the words,
there was a tiny popping sound as she broke
into little black galaxies which drifted apart, lazy repelled magnets.
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“into the straining night” and “a tiny popping sound” and “lazy repelled magnets” – oh my!
The “dying died a little more” followed by my favorite form of punctuation, the em dash, really caught my attention.
Damn and damn.
Felt this. The quote, and repeated, hits deep. The closing stanza sings images.