I’ll Bet You Think This Golden Shovel is about You
“Beloved, I am un-gathered here…I touch and smell in the rough flesh…”—Bob Hicok, “Elegy’s”
Like winter after fall, I follow you, Beloved.
Love, like satori, kicks you in the I.
Sex in the pm, coffee in the am.
Deciding who picks up which kid can feel like the U.N.,
where world class negotiators have gathered.
They’re from their homelands over there, but they’ve come here…
You can’t spell “relationship” without “I” and “I.”
Your skin has much to teach me when we touch.
Our love binds us together the way the word “and”
joins the senses when we say “taste and smell
and see and hear and touch.” “Love I’m in,”
says Yoda after he meets a green gal and learns the
force that governs the stars, the winds, and the rough
waters is love, the touching of flesh by flesh…
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Love this! Never thought of not being able to spell relationship without an I and an I. So much to love here.
Thanks Victoria!
What truth, what fun. Ending with Yoda makes sense to me.
Thanks Linda!
Lol!
“Your skin has much to teach me when we touch” is an awesome line. I really liked this!
Thanks Philip.
I love this golden shovel.
Thanks Melva!
You get extra awesome nerd fan points from me for utilizing Yoda in poetry.
interesting title
It’s just a placeholder. I don’t know what to call it.
Love the title. Took me back to that Carly Simon song from the early 1970’s.
It’s an allusion, yes. Mick Jagger sings backup on that song, btw.
Love the title and the fun turn to Yoda towards the end. Talk about language leading you in a poem!
Thanks Ellen!