Into Nowhere & Beyond
She’d park her black Coupe Deville at the bottom and start her confident gait towards homes that looked like barns, trailers with no underpinnings, rusted siding and splintered wood all sharp and ready as cacti needle. No one ever shot a woman in pearls. You opened the door and took her in– her high pitched giggle and memorized speech like cursive butter full of features and guarantees. When you saw her beehive bopping up a trail all you could really do was prepare to be charmed. Startling as it was, like a real life commercial come to life, she promised you the work was already done. Before you knew it, she’d stain your carpets and clean them so bright you’d see them for the first time over. It was a magic trick that left immaculate threads like new bedsheets. You might feel tempted to lay down against the soft fresh floor and rest awhile. With sales pitches like storytelling, Naomi Ratcliffe was a stout five-ten of cloudy salt-and-pepper hair and low heels. She’d walk right in with her long pencil skirts and pantyhose, the collared shirts with the severe shoulder pads, all her rings and scarves and sunglasses. Like a movie star, she’d track that red clay in and smile and smile, even when someone remembered her husband. She’d sell two to all who knew the stories of how he’d whisper like an astronaut into the vacuum hoses, how he turned a knife on the family, convinced he was the hero of the story. But it was her who’d hiked up all those holler gravel paths. It was her who waved her arm until it hurt. She swore she knew all’you’all’s mommas’andem until she’d charmed the whole of Pike County, until she had to start cooking the books. But even God forgave her for that in the end.
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“No one ever shot a woman in pearls.” grabbed me. “memorized speech like cursive butter full of features and guarantees.” tied me in. “And every third house remembered her husband,” made me want to travel to PiKe County for the visitation and learn more about the cooking of the books. Loved the rythm and the images throughout. The first and last sentence set the perfect frame. I love this death of a sales woman piece. Maybe I git it all wrong but I love it all the same.
Nah, Fanny. You read it right. <3 Thank you night time friend for reading about my Granny.
Neat. I really like the style. Very easy and very cinematic…i see it…..neat… thanks Samantha. For writing and for sharing.
“You might feel tempted to lay down against the soft fresh floor and rest awhile.” Nice and of course the astronaut quick followed by the knife
Thank you, Coleman. Quite an honor to get a comment from both you and Linda!
Fabulous! So many great lines! Was this your mother, Sam? I hope so.
I would have forgiven her too.
Thanks, Kevin! This is about my grandmother. Her husband had a mental breakdown and she went back to work. Eventually, she paid off a house on her own like that. I’m obsessed with how these women lived alone in the woods and couldn’t be contained.
Then you honor them by sharing their stories and doing it so well!
I hope so! Thank you. 💕
I agree with Kevin. I’m in her fan club!
She would have convinced you all your grandchildren needed vacuums for a solid future. 💕
What an amazing portrait, Sam! Love reading it.
Thank you, Sylvia!
So many great lines, and I can see her with her beehive hair do and her pearls! And cleaning up that stain on the rug. Ta da! This is wonderful.
That’s when you know you got it. Selling to everybody. Thanks E!