is it okay to feel resentment like
a caraway seed and crumbled raisin
with all its hard ridges
swallowed down my throat
not so bad as to choke
but bad enough that water’s all i can think about?
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Yes! Those opening lines are unique and rich. I will never look at a caraway seed the same again. I will find one in a cabbage roll and be like, “Get out of here you little beast of resentment!”
I love everything about this! The essential question, the powerful imagery, the rhythm.