You Kept It Together As Long As You Could
Ode to a brother
Sax:
wind unstruck
by anything but lips
the way you could send
sound to Heaven & back
like a kite slipping through
stirred air
how
your looseleaf compositions
your quantum notes
lunged toward wider spaces
then returned to rest
we thought God was speaking
to our vibrating selves
you made it easy for our ears
we had nothing to do
but believe
it will be what we hear
the day after our death
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Oh, Jim, this is lovely! I especially like the set-off second stanza – the vibrating selves.
And I’m very fond of those concluding lines — just beautiful.
That stanza that starts Sax;
Is stunning . Lovely ode tribute to brother!
Beautiful piece of writing, Jim. I really enjoyed this poem.
i am impressed at how much of this i felt
So full of feeling. I have so enjoyed your poems this June.
You have captured sound in an incredible visual:
the way you could send
sound to Heaven & back
like a kite slipping through
stirred air