Your sudden wrench away
Throws me off balance
I slip on slick grass. You say
Maybe you’re too polite to be a poet
Too nice to learn to slice
Off the ends of leaves
As you yank away
The ivy from the house,
Tough old vines
Clung on like ticks attached
To the underarm
My silence is the knife
You need to finish the job
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Jim – How to portray two people in just a few words/actions! You are the master. Love “too polite to be a poet.” And I may miss the whippoorwills, but the ticks not so much!
Silence as a knife seems fresh in the context of yanking old vines. Finely drawn.
Nice
What a powerful ending!
Ouch. A clean cut;)
All the verbs, like “wrench, slice, yank” show the anger of the moment – the clash of differing opinions, the scold. The reader immediately gets the picture, without having it spelled out! I love the way you write!
Great title
There is something and everything in these words, Jim.